Sunrise Sunset A Haiku
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Sunrise
New day beginning
Rising glorious colors
Forecast Promising
Sunset
Nightfall to begin
In the wings darkness awaits
As the sun goes down
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so awesome so beautiful... you are so good at this..
bravo Susan.. always love your poems..
i voted way up
debbie
Pretty Haikus and love the pictures!
Very beautiful!
Sunset sunrise both perfect :)
Now you've done it - a perfect Haiku for day or night:) lol
Ruchira
Deborah
Rebecca
barbergirl
Frank
RH
Thank you everyone for reading and for all the awesome comments!
Gorgeous! I love these beautiful nature poems and photos on a bleak January day. There is nothing better. I hope you will write more original poetry. Awesome!
Beautiful Susan!
Love it!
Beautiful!
Sunrise, Sunset. These lyrics would make a great song. Oh, wait, it is a great song. And a great haiku, Susan.
nice imagery, lovely haiku!
Tammy
Audrey
Hmrjmr
Capadium
drbrj
cat on a soapbox
Thanks everyone. drbj, I was actually going to add a video with the song Sunrise Sunset. Maybe I still will.
Haaaa! Such beauty in your your words as in the photos.
Absolutely fabulous Haiku's Susan, I'd like to link this to my sunrise/sunset hubs if that's ok.
Voting up, best wishes Lesley
Cardisa, Thank you.
MM, I would be honored for you to link this haiku to your sunrise/sunset hubs. Thank you so much!
Beautiful description of the sunrise and sunset, perfect pictures..Loved it Susan..
I love the photos! What a beautiful poem to read on such a cold blustery day. Thanks! I am ready to go sun bathing.
Ruby and tlpogue, Thank you both and yes I am so ready to feel that warm sun too. A few more months to go :)
I am going to have to start calling you the Haiku Queen. Yes indeed you are getting better with each published Haiku. Loved the photos to match the mood. Great job my talented friend. Voted Up, awesome and beautiful like you.
Hi Susan,
These are wonderful. Love the pictures. So calm & serene.
Have a good evening.
love the contrasting times of the day...the pictures are awesome as well...
Vincent, Thank you so much dear friend.
Sue, Thank you. Today I wishing I was at the beach in Florida.
raciniwa, Thank you.
Beautiful Susan! I will love to have a Haiku teacher. The simple way in which those like you, that are, none short of professional at writing them.
The effects it has on others , it's just amazing!
It's beautiful, and touching , thief a smile off your face regardless of what you are thinking.
I guess the description that fits the most , is a prelude to beautiful Haiku.
Bless.
Sky, I enjoy writing haiku's and love the responses I get from them such as yours. Thank you so much.
Great haiku Susan. I love writing these as their short but say so much with so little. I also love the photos.
Thanks Linda. They are fun to do.
Short and Sweet - I love it.
I love watching the sunrise and sunset too. :)
Lady_E, Thank you, glad you liked it.
just have to say were they haiku? PLUS i loved it
Thank you Sophia.
Ruchira Level 8 Commenter 4 months ago
wow...awesome!
beautiful message being conveyed in simple words.
voted way way up with awesome!
You are rocking it, susan :)