Pine Tree In Winter - Haiku

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By Just Ask Susan

Source: Photo by Susan Zutautas

Bows gently bending

Holding natures fresh cold snow

Evergreen beauty


Comments

Christy Z 5 months ago

Perfectly done Sue!!! Really nice.

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Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

wow.. okay just wow

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

Thanks Sis :)

Frank, Wow Thank you.

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Mysticalmoon Level 1 Commenter 5 months ago

Nice!! Well done!

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Zac828 Level 2 Commenter 5 months ago

Haiku perfection, excellent

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Nicky Page Level 1 Commenter 5 months ago

Brilliant!

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Nell Rose Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Hi, perfect explanation, lovely!

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

Mysticalmoon, Zac, Nicky and Nell, Thank you all so much!

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Hyphenbird Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Perfect. I can taste the snow on my tongue and feel my cheeks burn with cold. I love it and snow! About January I long for green and the evergreens save me.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

Hyphenbird, Snow is okay with me until after Christmas. It's too bad it has to stay until March. I wish I was a skier.

Marymac47 5 months ago

Really nice!! Waiting for our first snow! First thing in the morning when nothing has touched it yet!! Beautiful!! Voted Up!

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b. Malin Level 7 Commenter 5 months ago

Perfect Susan, just Perfect!

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Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Simply beautiful Susan

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

Marymac, Thank you.

b. Malin, Hope that you are enjoying Florida :) Thanks.

Rosemay, I think this one is my favorite that I've done so far. Thanks.

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The Midwest Man Level 1 Commenter 5 months ago

Very nice!

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JT Walters 5 months ago

Just lovely. I really like your poetry.

JT

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RealHousewife Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Beautiful! And reminds me of how pretty all the trees will look here soon - it's snowing!

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Snurre Level 4 Commenter 5 months ago

This is beautiful!

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

Midwest Man,JT, RH and Snurre, Thanks everyone. Snowing here today in Ontario too :)

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Perfectly beautiful...

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Cardisa Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Those three lines are so beautiful and descriptive. Haiku is now my most favorite type of prom to read. Short and spicy.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

Ruby and Cardisa, Thank you. I think Haiku is now my favorite type of poem to write :)

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Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Susan is a star

she can haiku like a pro

so much fun to read

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

Linda makes me smile

Sunshine straight from Florida

Brightens every day

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Beautiful!

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Sunshine625 Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Outstanding!

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

MM, Thank you.

Sunshine aka Linda, :)))

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 5 months ago

Hi Susan

I crown you queen of the Haiku. :-)

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 5 months ago

Sue, That's quite the compliment, thank you.

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