Happy Valentine's Day a Rictameter Poem

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By Just Ask Susan

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Hubbers


To all of you


Happy Valentine's Day


You all make my days happier


Through reading, sharing, writting, everyday


Don't know what I'd do without you


All my inspiration


I get from you


Hubbers




This is my first attempt at a Rictameter Poem. I hope that I did this correctly.


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RealHousewife profile image

RealHousewife Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Susan - thank you! I loved this poem - not only had I never heard of this type - I LOVE the message:) Ditto to you!

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gregas Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

Hi Susan, Very well done. You will do more. Greg

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

RH, Thanks. I'd never heard of a Rictameter poem before joining HubPages and I really like them. This one was fun to do.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

gregas, Thank you, glad that I did it properly, and I hope to do more of them.

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Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Thank you Just Be Susan :)

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Lizam1 Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

Lovely. Inspiring and back to you too. Liza:-)

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Beautiful Susan..Happy Valentine Day to you.

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Rusticliving Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

I love it! I need to read what a Rictameter poem is. But by the sounds of the other comments.. you did an awesome job! Happy Valentines Day to you as well Susan! :)

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Frank, Lizam and Ruby, Thank you all.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Rusticliving, Thanks and this is what a Rictameter poem is:

A rictameter is a nine line poetry form. The 1st and last lines are the same with the syllable count as follows:

line 1 - 2 syllables - same as line 9

line 2 - 4 syllables

line 3 - 6 syllables

line 4 - 8 syllables

line 5 - 10 syllables

line 6 - 8 syllables

line 7 - 6 syllables

line 8 - 4 syllables

line 9 - 2 syllables - same as line 1

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AudreyHowitt Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Hi Susan--Happy Valentine's Day to you as well!

Joan Whetzel 3 months ago

Happy valentine's day to you Susan.

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Millionaire Tips Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

I hadn't heard of a Rictameter poem. Very interesting - and sweet. Happy Valentine's Day.

Ruchira profile image

Ruchira Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Wow...gotta try Rictameter poem genre :)

Beautiful message conveyed, Susan! Thank you for inspiring me as well!

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Deborah Brooks 3 months ago

Susan happy valentines day to you too.. have a great one

Debbie

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rebeccamealey Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Interesting poetry form and a sweet message. Thanks Susan and a Happy Valentine's to you!

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billybuc Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Thank you for the poem Susan, and thank you for teaching me rictameter. Loved it!

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Hi Susan

This is beautiful. You and many other hubbers have been and are an inspiration to me.

Thank you and Happy Valentines Day. ")

Voted up and away!

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b. Malin Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

How very Lovely Susan, Thank You...and the very Same to you My Hubber Friend, Happy Valentine's Day!

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drbj Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Happy Valentine's Day to you, too, Susan. Good job with the poem. Ric and Tameter agree.

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PDXKaraokeGuy Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

susan, right back at you!

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raciniwa 3 months ago

sweet...thank you...likewise here...

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Audrey, Joan, Millionaire Tips and Ruchira, Thank you all.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Deborah, Rebecca, Billy and Sue, Thank you.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

b. Malin, drbj, PDX and raciniwa, Thanks everyone.

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Cardisa Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

All I know is I love it, don't know anything about rictameter poetry. We love you too Susan. Thanks for a beautiful poem.

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Eiddwen 3 months ago

Hi Susan what a great poem which I can definitly relate to.

Also you give joy and inspiration to so many as well so here's to so many more hubs to share on here.

I award this one an up up and away.

Take care Susan and enjoy your day.

Eddy.

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sankari.nayagam 3 months ago

Hi Susan,

Your haiku poems inspired me to write one. You have introduced a new kind of poetry to me now. Expecting more of this kind poems from you so that it will inspire me to try one of this kind.

Happy valentine's day!

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marcoujor Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Susan,

Inspirational, charming and lovely ... just like you!

Happy Valentine's Day to you! UP & Beautiful, mar.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Cardisa, Eddy, sankari, and Mar, Thank you all.

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Rusticliving Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Susan.. that is so cool!.. Thanks for explaining it to me! I may try my hand at it..but first need to learn how to count! LOL! Again, Great Job!:-)

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Rusticliving, You're welcome and thank you again.

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donnaisabella Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

Thank you. I learned a new word today. Rictameter.

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sweetguide Level 3 Commenter 3 months ago

It's so cool dear Susan. I'm Love it.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

donnaisabella and sweetguide, Thank you both.

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Hello Susan, a fabulous poem - thank you!

And thank you for being an inspiration to us all.

Best wishes Lesley

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks Lesley :)

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Hyphenbird Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Ah thanks Susan. Happy Valentine's Day to you also.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Brenda, Thank you.

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

How lovely, your poem is gorgeous.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

acaetnna, Thanks.

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Docmo Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

I learnt something new Susan, and I really enjoyed the poem too. Thanks for this.Hope you had a wonderful Valentine's Day!

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prasetio30 Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Happe Valentine, my dear. Sorry I am late to know this. But better late than never, right. You are so sweet and your heart filled by "true love". Beautiful poem. Rated up and take care!

Love and peace, Prasetio

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Doc, I like the new picture. The rictameter poem was new to me also, and something I learned here at HubPages. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Prasetio, You're never too late:) Thank you.

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Senoritaa Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Although I am reading it way past V day, still feels so beautiful.

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Just Ask Susan Hub Author 3 months ago

Senoritaa, Thank you :)

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